hello, I have poem that I would like you to promote on your successful blog, if you wouldn’t mind doing so.
its called “can you?” by myself, Tatiana Agatha Ennin.
my friend, Dajon Hoyte-Bruce and I run the poetry blog known as “ourpoeticinsanity.wordpress.com” just for reference
You could bathe in a tub of cloudy tears to keep your mind “clean”…
You could feed yourself false propositions to oppose the hunger in your heart…
You could keep yourself warm with the scalding words that his tongue produced…
You could dress yourself in an attire of which consisted of a burden balanced on your head,
A weakened covering to protect your chafed, run down, calloused feet,
An emotional scarf weaved from the fibres of hardship, guilt, confusion and doubt.
Wrapped chokingly tight
around your neck.
To protect yourself from the cold air striking and reaching your chest.
Your chapped mouth…
Your insensitive nose.
Can you ever die in a home of wretchedness?
You could strangle yourself with the ropes that restricted you from trusting and feeling emotion.
You could hang yourself with the words that lifelessly and meaninglessly dangled from your lip.…
You stand on the boulder of corruption.
Hoping to majestically land on the base of which an overabundance of reliability and
inhabitation existed on…
And wonder if you’re committing one of society’s most conventional motives.
You took the leap of something that would offer you ‘faith’.
You gracefully took the leap of death.
I would also appreciate it greatly if you gave me any personal feedback or response, via email. As I am a budding poet, aged 14 and I could definitely use some mature response.
from Tatiana and Dajon :).